Well written, and engaging, though I would lobby for shorter, simpler sentences. I am fairly sure I didn't understand the last sentence, for instance, and I can't read "eschew" without being reminded of the T-shirts that say "ESCHEW OBFUSCATION." Congratulations on publication, and may there be many more!
Congrats! Very well written - of course what I'd expect from you.
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Aunt Cathy
You're a long ways from Hillsboro baby. Good to see your blog and catch up on your life!
ReplyDeleteCarrie
:) I was just reading YOUR blog! I am a long ways from Hillsboro.
ReplyDeleteWell written, and engaging, though I would lobby for shorter, simpler sentences. I am fairly sure I didn't understand the last sentence, for instance, and I can't read "eschew" without being reminded of the T-shirts that say "ESCHEW OBFUSCATION." Congratulations on publication, and may there be many more!
ReplyDeleteCongrats Stephanie!!
ReplyDeleteAre you still painting? Your work is top line!! Thanks for joining my blog!!
Jim